📝 The Complete Editorial Chronicles
David G's Marathon Manuscript Makeover
From August 11th to 26th, 2024 - Two weeks of intensive literary surgery
🏆 Editor's Hall of Fame
🗣️ Most Passionate Plea
"Make his name Pierre throughout, it's far too confusing to the reader to mix them up like this." - Repeated twice for emphasis!
📏 Most Precise Correction
"A furlong is 220 yards, so a few furlongs must be about 500 yards, an awfully long way to shout across!"
🎭 Dialogue Drama Queen
12 separate comments about dialogue tags, speaker identification, and conversation flow!
📅 Editorial Timeline
Aug 11, 2024
The journey begins - First tense corrections and structure notes
2 comments
Aug 18, 2024
Major editing blitz - Structure overhaul and clarity improvements
12 comments
Aug 26, 2024 AM
The dialogue wars begin - Morning session focused on speech tags
18 comments
Aug 26, 2024 PM
Final refinements - Character naming and technical corrections
14 comments